Friday, 4 August 2017
The shoemaker
Once apon a time there lived an old man nice clever man named Jeff. He made some wonderful shoes. One day a girl named shaly came to the old man's shoe shop. She saw a wonderful red shoe. She was about to take it and then an evil man went by. His name was Jake. Then Shaly went to Jake's shoe shop when he showed his shoes. Then the old man raing the bell and Shaly came back to Jeff. Then Jake made his shoes cheaper. Shaly bought Jakes shoes. The next day Jeff made his shoes golden and shiny. Shaly came again and bought Jeff's shoes. Jake was crying so he ran out of the town. He was crying because Shaly bought Jeffs shoes The End.
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that is a good story brother because it almost sounds like an real story on youtube. from Joseph
ReplyDeleteMalo e lelei Tavakesina
ReplyDeleteWhat a great story. I can see that you have used some great descriptive words. I wonder if I can buy some of Jeff's shoes too.
Well Done!
From Miss Vaevae
Hi Tavakesina,
ReplyDeleteWhat a great story, I could see that you have used some great desciptive words. I wonder if I can buy some of Jeff's shoes too. Well keep up the great work.
From Jasmyne